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Book Reviews – Anybody can criticize; but Constructive criticism is an arrow well-targeted at bettering the author.

Loving Frank (Llyod Wright): by Nancy Horan

18 Tuesday Feb 2014

Posted by dr sweetyshinde in Biography/Autobiography, Constructive Criticism: Book reviews

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Ayn Rand, biography, book review, Fountainhead, Frank Lloyd Wrigt, Mamah Cheney, Nancy Horan, Taliesin

“The impossible, the clean and consistent. That is what you are in love with. Art is the only place you will find it.” says Wynand to Dominique (Fountainhead)

Frank Lloyd Wright, the supreme architect. Mamah Cheney, his client’s wife. Their real-life love story.

Mamah was a waiting-to-exhale housewife in a ‘stifle-a-yawn’ marriage with the bland, devoted and very cuckolded Edward. On the verge of her second pregnancy, she felt the spell of Wright’s charisma and artistic dynamo. The brazen affair quickly detonated two families (his six and her two children), made her a convenient ‘harlot’ for News headlines and wrecked his architectural career. Almost.

I have a dismissive impatience for  starry-eyed romances. Romeo-Juliet. Even Bridges of Madison County. They need a dose of humdrum, mundane domestic life, I thought. Bills, grocery, laundry,toilet-seat-up, income tax, dandruff.

To be fair, Wright-Mamah survived admirably through most of the above. They made a 7-year life together, following their  ‘decision made in harmony with the soul’ . He built Taliesin for her (Reminded me of Dominique’s Stoddard temple!). This idyllic home is also where Mamah’s skull was hacked with an axe, then doused in gasoline and set on fire, alongwith her 2 children, by a maniacal servant.  aZj7nN3e_g5JrDrgdW2wgtTIl30BOIafL74xq5qYX5kVOcGNYQcQFURs8P3WFt6luNM4cjDfpWTYNR2CMl_0mmPKy2q_jGI49sAvP4aEZ4scJN-L7A8 frank-lloyd-wright_taliesin-west-morning-light

Inspite of the irritating self-absorption of the protagonists, the Mamah who lingers on in the mind, is an endearing mix of steely resolve and innocence. She was fluent in German, French, Italian, Spanish, Greek, Latin. mamah cheney Then in the midst of a torn family and filthy headlines, she spent a summer mastering Swedish to translate Ellen Key’s Love and Ethics. And yet, as she admits ‘She had a grand ambition for life. All she did with it was to attach herself to a colossal personality, who would have made great work irrespective of her.’

Guilty Confession to make. I kept trying to fit Wright into Howard Roark mold all through the book. (It was rumored that Roark’s integrity and fanatic self belief was modeled on Wright, as was his building-in-sync-with-Nature houses). Wright had the apt halo of eccentricity to match his artistic magic. He spent extravagantly and always had a trail of unpaid bills. He went into furious depression when his students ‘stole his ideas and took credit for them’. I expected more flair than the decidedly unoriginal ‘I am stuck in an unhappy marriage’  pick-up line.  Incidentally, Ayn Rand did not form a favorable impression when she met him during Fountainhead research.

Would the affair make headlines and scandalous gossip if THE Frank Wright was not involved? Maybe not.

Would the book leave a bitter-sweet taste if not for Mamah’s chilling end? Maybe not.

To put in a nutshell, a better way to fall in love with F.L Wright would be this. fallingwater  frank_lloyd_wright_-_fallingwater_interior_5 And a re-read of the first lines way up the page.

Taali-Ban The Hindus

13 Thursday Feb 2014

Posted by dr sweetyshinde in Constructive Criticism: Book reviews, Mythology, World of Books & I

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ban, book, book ban, controversy, Hindu, Hinduism, hypocriscy, parody, Penguin India, religion, sarcasm, Wendy Doniger

Penguin: ‘’Get me the Khajuraho orgy capture. Pronto.”

Wendy: Sir, this is not porn. My book covers the grave interpretation and inter-relation between History and Religi…”

Penguin: ‘’Lady, you will be the grave of me. You stick to writing. Leave the sales pitch to me. I need eyeballs for your 800 pages of dry research. Now where is that orgy?”

Wendy: ‘I warn you, this will backfire. In the age of wendysocial media, a misleading cover page that does not match inner contents will never sell.”

Penguin: ”Then match the contents with the cover-page. Unless you have a better idea.”

PA: “Eureka! Ban it.” 

Wendy: “You dolt. We are discussing how to market the book; not how to blanket it…”

Penguin: “PA, you are promoted! Lady, ever heard of the forbidden apple? Adam-Eve would have never bit into it if not for the lure of the guilty pleasure.”

PA: ‘’I know all too well. My kids wont eat that damn apple until I drown it in sugar, custard and cinnamon. I even need to sneak broccoli into pasta.”

Penguin: “Shush! Make it controversial. Let’s publicize this book as an insult to Hindus. We have very thin skins, our tender sentiments bruise easily. Especially when a non-Indian does it. Never mind what we do with our religion ourselves.”

Wendy: ‘’What do you do with it?”

Penguin: “The Bhagwad Gita, for instance. We pass it from one dirty hand to another; extortionist, smuggler, murderer. It stands as mute witness to blatant perjury, exploitation and injustice. Meanwhile, Gandhari holds up the scales and smirks in her dark corner. So, as my PA says, pry open the wounds and let the blood spurt!” untitled

Wendy: ‘’I don’t understand. We came to discuss publicity tactics for my book. This is defamation.”

PA: “There is a difference???”

Penguin: “Her naïveté warms my heart. So then, when there is controversy,50 % will flare into a rage and demand our blood; 50 % will rush to defend our freedom of expression. The remaining…”

Wendy: ‘’Err..you used up all 100%”

PA: “Quiet! He markets books. Don’t teach him how to twist figures and tally percentages.”

Wendy: ‘’Woof, woof.Thump, thump.”

PA: ‘’Meow. Scratch!”

Penguin: ‘’ Now, now, behave like humans. The 50% defenders will purchase it, to protect their skin and to show-off a copy on their book-shelf…”

PA: (sotto voce) “Who knows, some of them may even read it!”

Penguin:’’I heard that. The protesting 50% have to buy it. I mean, if they need to provide proof to the court, they will need to scan, peruse and highlight the controversial passages. Hence, we get the protestors as our customers!”

PA: ‘’Teeny-weeny doubt. How will we sell the book if there is a ban?”

Penguin:’’Child, I rely on Gandhari for that. She will grant us a 6 month golden-period between now and the ban. We smirk all the way to my bank in these 6 months. Besides, there is pdf, wmv, e-pub…”

Wendy:’’I object strongly. I have put years of research into the book. Now I have to survive on snarls, slogans and smut?”

Penguin:’’ Incredible…you can even create poetry! Did you just mention smut? The smuttier, the better. That will expand my customer base; to include all those who will purchase the book; if only to flick through the pages and zero in on the smutty sexual innuendoes.”

Wendy:’’You are demeaning my work, my patience, my art…”

Penguin:’’Did I mention the 3-book contract?”

Wendy: “Gulp. 3 book contract?”

Penguin:’’Your Hinduism has sparked a tangential volcano in my mind. We have 36,000 Gods. Maybe even 330 million. Now, imagine one controversy per God. Let’s begin with Dwarka and its orgies.”

Wendy:’’ (Splutter, gasp, blanch) What blasphemy is this? I am a researcher……not a …”

Penguin:’’Then Re-Search. Discover. Uncover. Rip the lid off. We Indians believe History only when researched and chronicled by foreigners. Now imagine the 16,000 wives pining in Dwarka, their frustration, the cat-fights, the harem politics…”

Wendy:’’ Harem? You are confusing the Mughals with…”

Penguin:’’Whatever. Who cares? Just make it juicy and we will suck it up. “

Wendy:’’You are insane.”

Penguin:’’Why would I be a publisher if I wasn’t insane? Now bring on the Khajuraho book-cover, please. Honestly, I am a God-send to the publishing world. I need to get a patent on this ban-trick before others try the same.”

Wendy:’’ India is a democracy. To ban is the act of Tali-ban.”

PA: “Sir, on that note…de taali!” Continue reading →

The Broken Nest: Nashtaneer

19 Sunday Jan 2014

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;Literature, book review, Classics, Rabindranath Tagore, Satyagit Ray

Tagore is a one-man answer to all accusations that men simply do not understand women. He does. In depth.

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Nashtaneer (Broken Nest) takes you into the tight world of Charu, who grows from child-bride to woman. Often ignored by her husband in favor of his business, she drifts into a poetic game with her brother-in-law.
Trying to imitate his literary style, she stumbles upon her own. To her consternation, her individual style alienates her brother-in-law, as he starts viewing her as a competitor, while she yearns for his approval.

As the jittery brother-in-law distances himself, her husband begins to woo her in a clumsy attempt at poetry. She rebuffs him absent-mindedly, leaving him deeply wounded, leaving her raw & vulnerable and ending in a chain of events that have you feeling for every character.
It is a nuanced interplay, a tug-of-emotions that constantly leaves you at the edge of ‘If only…‘
This is sheer mastery in words.

Translated later into the movie Charulata. Directed by S. Ray. 1 2

The Guide : R.K Narayan

19 Sunday Jan 2014

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book review, Dev Anand, R.K Narayan, S.D Burman, Vijay Anand, Waheeda Rehman

I prefer the book to the movie. Always.
The only two exceptions are Masoom (based on Man, Woman, Child) and Guide (Guide).

guide
Raju Guide’s life is a roller-coaster of lost dreams, broken promises, shunted relations.
His idyllic life twists with the entry of Rosie, the young, spurned wife of the much older archeologist Marco. Rosie grasps onto Raju’s shoulder as she rejects her marriage for her only true love…Dance.
Alas, her passion for dance and Raju’s obsession for her lead them into a downward spiral of deceit, misunderstanding and betrayal. Who betrays whom? Can Raju rise beyond the mundane into the sublime?

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The book differs from the movie somewhat: Rosie in the book is single-mindedly focussed on her career. Once Raju is out of her life, she is all competence and confident self-assurance as she takes up the reins of her life and career. Rosie of the movie is more emotional, naive, vulnerable and sacrificing (as all Indian movies demand of their heroines)

Lingering moments: Waheeda blossoming from a sulking nag to a carefree soul as soon as she wears the ghungroo (dance anklets), the snake dance, Saiyyan beimann song seamlessly interwoven into Kya se kya; Raju guide  blithely counteracting the Sanskrit-spouting swindlers with his English.
Major thumbsup: The haunting soundtrack by S.D Burman is a massive plus point for the movie, along with the easy charm of Dev Anand and the exquisite Waheeda Rehman. Innovative song takes by Vijay Anand.

Recommended: Both book and movie.

W.R

Complexity of ideas and Simplicity of words: Rise of Sun Prince, Book Review

24 Tuesday Dec 2013

Posted by dr sweetyshinde in Constructive Criticism: Book reviews, Debutante Authors, Mythology

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book review, ISKON, Jaico, mythology, Rama, Ramayana, shubh vilas, Sun Prince

…in my view, the above combination makes for rich literature.

The author, Shubha Vilas Prabhu forces your eyes to read laterally and vertically at the same time. Every incident has its parallel interpretation and insight as a footnote.

The narrative ,in a non-linear sequence goes through Rama’s childhood up to his marriage. Delightfully , the latter half focuses on Vishwamitra. His repeated attempts, failures and sheer perseverance to become Brahmarishi is a beacon of hope for every person who loses heart at failure in life.

There are slivers of refreshing details: like Ayodhya following the rainwater harvest system; why Ayodhya means unconquerable; how Saraswati tongue-twisted Kumbhakarna into deep slumber; why Kaam dev is called Ananga( thus implying that Lust is merely a state of mind). Why Rama snapped the Shiva bow instead of merely stringing it; there is a lucid clarification for it too.

There are nuggets of sharp one-liners in the footnote:

Personal favorites include 1. To make mistakes implies lack of foresight; not repeating mistakes is a sign of intelligence 2.The mind is a connoisseur in converting trivial puddles into bottomless oceans. 3. A good leader knows the art of delegation. He himself carries the most demanding role- of being Inspiration 4. Most people want a mentor who will tell them exactly what they want to hear. The process of mentoring the mentor 5. The most vulnerable time to commit mistakes is when victory is close at hand 6. The degree of insult is inversely proportional to the size of the entity causing it.

Such countless gems scattered across the book warrant encores and re-re-rereads. Sun Prince

My only grudge would be making the marriage age of Rama as 12 years. Especially as there is love at first sight and Sita’s feverish feelings for Rama’s broad shoulders. At age 12?

A few questions: If Parshuram, Rama and Krishn were all reincarnations of Vishnu;

1. How did Parshuram coexist with the latter two? Parshuram was a Brahmin who annihilated Kshatriyas, while Rama & Krishn were Kshatriyas.

2. If Rama gave up Sita to uphold his citizens’ doubts over her purity; Krishn married 16,000 women to uphold their doubtful purity. Isn’t that a study in contrasts?

I am confident the author will take up the gauntlet and provide us with lucid clarifications in his coming series. I have attended his sessions on Bhagwad Gita. He is extremely eloquent and articulate.Sun Prince

That aside, Book 1 makes one anticipate Book 2 for more interwoven tales, fresh perspectives, well-researched details and of course, that treasure trove of insightful footnotes.Congratulations!

Here is Book 2 review link!

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